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Monday, August 25, 2008

Chp 193. Flashback


11:30 PM

Abhishek Chopra fell on the blood stained floor.

"What have I done!!!???" He asked himself.

Lying on a pool of blood next to him were the lifeless bodies of his wife Sheranya and his good friend Jimmy Zothanpuia.

He was still clutching the large kitchen knife he had just used to stab his wife and Jimmy over and over again. The past five minutes felt like a bad dream to him. It was so surreal, but there he was, getting a taste of how real it was.

In a fit of rage he had taken the life of his wife and his friend Jimmy. He had just found out they were having an affair. Now as he sat on the floor dazed, he wondered whether it was really worth taking their lives for that.

He looked at the blood stained knife again. He contemplated for a few minutes and then finally took a deep breath and with full force plunged the knife deep into his stomach.



11:16 PM

"What???"

It was Jimmy exclaiming in surprise.

He had just spent the past 45 minutes drinking with the Chopras. He had known Abhishek Chopra for more than a year now ever since his colleague and good friend Sheranya got married to him. He was there on their grand wedding day and he even teased Sheranya about why she was not dancing in a Bollywood movie style on her wedding.

The moment Sheranya introduced him to Abhishek, they became close friends. Since then, he would swap stories about his home town Aizawl - Mizoram, with Abhishek and Sheranya.

But that night, there was something strange about Abhishek. He did not seem to be in his usual cool self. He did not laugh to Jimmy’s jokes, and even if he did, the artificiality was obvious.

Jimmy looked at Sheranya…

Suddenly Abhishek stood up and shouted, "Bastard, I know what you and my wife are doing behind my back!" He pulled out a large knife from under the cushion.



10:05 PM

ding dong…

The bell to the Chopra apartment rang melodiously.

Sheranya ran to the door. It was Jimmy, who greeted her with a smile.

"Sher," Jimmy said and hugged her as she opened the door.

"Jim, thanks for coming," Sheranya hugged him back comfortably.

"He’s been drinking the whole evening. I guess he had a rough day in office today. But he was quiet normal when he reached home this evening…"

"I’ll handle him, don’t worry…" Jimmy said, and then quickly added, "Hey regarding those smses…"

"We’ll discuss about that later. Right now go to my hubby and do whatever you guys do."



8:21 PM

ring ring…

"Hey Sher. Whassup?"

"Jim. Hi. You’re at home?"

"Yeah, I’ve just reached."

"Abhishek has been drinking for quite a while now. He’s even bought a new bottle of rum and he insists that you come over and drink with him!"

"Hahaha! Well as a matter of fact, I was planning to drink tonight anyway. Might as well do with him."

"Really? You don’t mind? Thanx! Can you reach here by 10’ish?"

"Sure thing. Anyway I have a good reason to see you, if you know what I mean…"

Sheranya giggled and then disconnected the call.



6:17 PM

As Abhishek read the messages in Sheranya’s phone while she was in the shower, his whole world turned upside down. His fingers trembled and everything around him became hazy. His heart beat accelerated and darkness seemed to swallow him up.

He read the smses once again, for the hundredth time.

"Darling, are you sure it’s safe for me to come over tonight? I think he’s starting to suspect something is up. What we do is amazing but I’m afraid he’ll hear the moans and screams eventually! Lolz."

"My love, I don’t know how long we can carry on like this behind his back. I know we can never tell him about our relationship, but I miss you so much… your gentle touch… your kiss… and the way we hold each other and fall off to sleep, even if it is only for a short while because I have to leave your apartment before he wakes up…"

"I know you told me not to sms you today, but I just can’t help it. I love you so much, and knowing you can read my messages in any other way delivers a brief warmth to my heart. I think I’ll slip in at your place tonight after he sleeps… Muaah."

He couldn’t breath.

He looked at the sender’s name once again, and still couldn’t believe it. The messages were from Jimmy.



5:02 PM

Abhishek reached home and took a shower immediately. The evening Mumbai rush hour was tiring and frustrating as usual.

After a good 20 minutes long shower, he could feel the energy slowly flowing back to his body again. He moved to the living room and switched on the TV. Seinfeld. "Ahhh", Abhishek sighed in delight.

Just when Jerry Seinfeld was about to crack one of his golden witty remarks, Sharenya entered the house.

"Hi honey!"

"Hi sweetheart. How was your day?"

"Argh. Usual stuff. Had a fight with the auto driver again because of a faulty meter. I wish I have a car too! I’m going to take a quick shower and then I’ll join you for dinner."

"Ok."

Sharenya threw her hand bag next to Abhishek and ran into the bathroom immediately. Her mobile phone rolled out and it caught Abhishek’s eyes. With no particular reason, Abhishek mindlessly took the phone and began browsing through it. Games… his "snake" record was still there. Music… she was still listening to "Rise up" by Yves LaRock.

And then he went to her sms inbox and he froze.



3:32 PM

beep beep…

Sheranya looked at her phone. It was an sms from Jimmy.

"Darling, I’m so sorry about last night. I couldn’t come over to your place because of the obvious reasons. Tonight I promise I will be there once he falls off to sleep. I long to slip in underneath the blanket besides you again and celebrate the love we have all night long. Love you. Muaaaah."

She blushed a bit. She got up from her office cubicle and looked at where Jimmy was sitting. She made eye contact with him and smiled. She pointed at her mobile and Jimmy smiled back.



8:00 AM

The day didn’t start off well for Jimmy at all. First of all, the water supply to his apartment got over just when he was in the middle of a shower. And then his maid demanded an increment on her salary for cleaning the dishes everyday.

"Bloody hell, you came to work only four times the whole of last month!" Jimmy thought. But then, like any bachelor living in a bachelor pad in busy Mumbai, he shrugged it off and agreed to her demands.

He screamed at his kid brother, "Mapui, wake the hell up! You’re getting late for school! I’ve left 50 bucks for you on top of the fridge. Try not to spend it all." Then he hurriedly dressed up so that he could beat the early morning Mumbai rush hour.

On his way to work, he dropped his phone. "Fuck," he muttered.

When he finally reached office, he went directly to Sheranya Chopra.

"Morning Jim."

"Morning Sher. Uh…. Sweetie, can you do me a favor?"

"Sure."

"Well, my little bro has been staying with me for the past two weeks or so, and I don’t want him to know that my girlfriend stays over for the night… kinda like the whole big brother setting a good example thingie… And then this morning, I dropped my freaking phone on the way to office. The display is completely screwed. I can see the sender’s name but the rest of the messages are completely distorted. Can I forward the smses I receive from my girlfriend to your phone so that I can read them there?"

"Of course!" Sher replied.


28 comments:

Aqua said...

Kima, you really have a talent for writing. enjoyed the story and didn't expect the 'twist'.

illusionaire said...

wow! That was a quick comment! I've just finished posting this story and while I was designing the time images using photoshop to put along with this post, I already got a comment from you! :)

Thanx for the read Aqua!

Dee Dee said...

Shades of 'Vantage Point'...should we name it 'audio point'?

illusionaire said...

Vantage Point was a flashback to the same time, over and over again.

This story is more in the style (reverse chronology) of Memento a movie I just loveeee!

toy soldier said...

Zingah ka chhiar a,lunch ei laiin ka thriannu ka hrilh vel,ngaihnawm ti vel ltk a..:)

VaiVa said...

EPL season thar leh Arsenal 1st match uff... what a busy schedule... couldn't make up mind whether to attend Mumbai Mizo Freshers' Social or to stay back and relax on the sofa watching the gunners!!!
Then, dropped his cell phone... display went blank.. wow!!! a new story was born tih ka va han duh ve!!! Mah se hetiang chhiar tur i rawn chhawp chhuah zel dawn chuan hun dang ah pawh skip zel kan phal e!!!

VaiVa said...

EPL season thar leh Arsenal 1st match uff... what a busy schedule... couldn't make up mind whether to attend Mumbai Mizo Freshers' Social or to stay back and relax on the sofa watching the gunners!!!
Then, dropped his cell phone... display went blank.. wow!!! a new story was born tih ka va han duh ve!!! Mah se hetiang chhiar tur i rawn chhawp chhuah zel dawn chuan hun dang ah pawh skip zel kan phal e!!!

illusionaire said...

@ Vaiva: lolzzz! Yes I think you and Tlangval U Maruata are the ONLY two persons who know how I got this story idea from! lolz.

Yes, dropping my phone that day on Mumbai Mizo Fresher's and screwing up my sms display was definitely bad luck, but then it gave me a terrific idea for this story! lolz...

@ Toy soldier: Is your friend pretty? :-D

ruolngulworld said...

thoroughly enjoyed the story. brilliant! you really have a talent for writing. nice twist at the end/beginning. thanks. look forward to your next.

Banno said...

I like the story. And the structure. The use of the cell phone and SMSes too is convincing.

mnowluck said...
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mnowluck said...

Its been weeks and weeks now.bro....Tring tring.. was still waiting for ur will call you back after I finished typing this ad .. hahaha..


Is this what you typed when I called You up dude? *EVIL GRIN*

Love reading this post.. I went through the post, then read.. and then re-read and re-read .. :)

Deleted the previous comment bcoz of my wrong usage of HTML tags

Sekibuhchhuak said...

Tun tum chu Sana i va ngah ve, hun vawn dik hmel thlap thlap khawp mai ;-)

Ngaihnawm phian mai..Abhisek khi tuemaw hmehbel theih dan awm mial em aw?:-)

Anonymous said...

Quite nice - you write well.

Mizopa

Nirav said...

Excellent stuff! Seriously, very well written...

Btw brother, is Wenger going to sign a central midfielder or not? We're in trouble if he doesn't bring someone top notch

luliana said...

Great!! This should be made into a bollywood movie, directed by RGV with Govinda in the lead role...I believe a couple of songs can be squeezed in somewhere... :D

Tak tak a, ngaihnawm khawp mai..

Jinx said...

Nimin ziiiingah ka chhiar a, comment post na kan hmuzolo lehpek anih kha!! Huizzz....dang proxy!!

I totally enjoyed reading through it...Eagerly waiting for the next one :)

illusionaire said...

@ chaotic serenity: Thanx! Do visit again when you can. I'm glad you like my writing.

@ Banno: Tried to put in as much modernization as possible :-) hihihi... all this was based from a true experience actually :)

@ Mnowluck: lolzzz. so sorry bro. I was extremely tied up that day. You know how Ad agencies are. I promise to call you first thing tomorrow. Now its nearly 12 and I am still in office. Thats life at an Ad Agency.

@ Seki: lolzzzz. Niaa... The clocks are the for the special effects. hihihi.... Abhsheka pawh i ngam loh kha aw, tikhan rawn tawng ve suh. lolz.

@ mizopa: Thanx! :-) I'd be honored by your visit again.

@ Nirav: Thanx for the visit bro. Glad you like the post. Are you talking about Silvestre? Yeah we already signed him but he's out till September injured! haha. I even put a large banner on my blog welcoming him, but removed it the night we went down to Fulham! I didn't want any of my ManUtd frens teasing me about it :-) Fabregas will be available from next match onwards. wooohoo!

@ luliana: haha. And you would make a great side dancer for the song too! :-))) Thanx for the read.

@ Jinx: Ah!!! My faithful reader! Even with proxy and all, you still manage to leave a comment. I am extremely impressed by that! Thanx once again Jinxie. urrmmm.. am a bit surprised I see no Olympics update from you... you didn't go?

vaphualization said...

that's the great mizohican again!!

Avi-a said...

write something different :P

Pardeep said...

Hi, nice build up of the story..but what I dont understand is how a boy friend can ask a colleague to receive his girl friend's mssgs ? Arent they supposed to be private ?

illusionaire said...

@ vaphualization: Thanx for visiting! :)

@ avi-a: Like? :-)

@ Pardeep: Well, that was why I tried to make the relationship between Jimmy and Sher to be very close. I mean, thats what some friends do too. You can read from the build-up (or actually a build-down since we are progressing chronologically from the end to the beginning... lolz), that Jimmy and Sher had been working together for many years even before Sher got married to Abhishek. Hence the reason why Jimmy would not hesitate to fwd his messages to Sher's phone since his was broken... Thanx a lot for reading dude.

Jerusha said...

Keimah ai in ka nau in ngaihnawm a ti lutuk a, a ngaihnawm tih thu phone ah a rawn sawi uar rups. Btw, is the fictional Jimmy based on a real person by any chance? :P

aduhi said...

Whats the moral of the story? Is there one? Good story, btw.

Chhama said...

My heart jumped upto my throat. Maybe that's how OJ "didn't" commit the murder. Oooh!! scaryyyyy.....

Almost Unreal said...

rin aiin a ngaihnom..hehe

Pixie said...

You seriously have talent! I totally agree wih what Aqua...
Awesome stuff... Very gripping...

Gervase said...

It won't work in actual fact, that is what I suppose.
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